为什么是这一篇？
很多同学写英语作文，遇到”数据变化”或”重大新闻宣布”时，只会用 very big / a lot of people / the price went up 这种初中级表达。FT这篇关于辉瑞/BioNTech疫苗90%有效的报道，恰好蕴含了3个考场高频句型——它们不是冷门词，而是结构公式，学会就能套用到几乎所有议论文和数据描述类写作中。
我们来看看原文中最精华的三个句子结构。
句型一：突破性成果宣布
FT 原文：
A Covid-19 vaccine being developed by Pfizer and Germany’s BioNTech has been found to be more than 90 per cent effective, in a breakthrough that could make the shot available for use by the end of the year if drug authorities give it the green light.
句型公式：
[Subject] has been found to be [adj/prep], in a breakthrough that could [result]
为什么好？
大多数学生写”重要发现”时会写：
❌ 学生初版
Scientists found a new vaccine. It is very effective. It can help many people.
✅ 升级版
A new vaccine has been found to be more than 90 per cent effective, in a breakthrough that could protect millions of people by the end of the year.
💡 效果
has been found to be 比 Scientists found 更客观、更新闻化；in a breakthrough that could + 结果 这个同位语结构，用一个逗号就交代了突破的影响，比另起一句简洁得多。
考场仿写：
A new study on climate change has been found to be highly alarming, in a breakthrough that could reshape global environmental policies.
Regular reading has been found to be effective in improving writing skills, in a breakthrough that could change how students prepare for exams.
句型二：市场数据联动描述
FT 原文：
Pfizer shares jumped almost 15 per cent in pre-market trading in New York, while those of Nasdaq-listed BioNTech rose 25 per cent.
British Airways parent IAG soared by a third in London, while Air France-KLM jumped 30 per cent in Paris and Ryanair climbed 16 per cent in Dublin.
句型公式：
[Entity A] [strong verb] by [X%], while [Entity B] [verb] by [Y%]
动词替换库（考场上直接取用）：
| 动词 | 程度 | 适用场景 |
|---|---|---|
| jump | 大幅上升 | 股价、销量、人数 |
| soar | 猛涨（幅度更大） | 数据爆发式增长 |
| climb | 稳步上升 | 温和增长 |
| rally | 反弹上涨 | 先跌后涨 |
| add to earlier gains | 在原有涨势上继续涨 | 连续增长 |
❌ 学生初版
The price of Apple shares went up a lot. Samsung shares also went up.
✅ 升级版
Apple shares jumped nearly 8 per cent in after-hours trading, while Samsung shares climbed 3 per cent in Seoul.
💡 效果
用 jumped / climbed 替代 went up a lot，数字精度（nearly 8 per cent）替代模糊描述，while 连接两个市场信息，一句话传递双倍信息量。
考场仿写：
Sales of electric cars soared by 45 per cent in Europe last year, while traditional petrol car sales fell by 12 per cent.
The number of students studying abroad jumped by 20 per cent in 2025, while those choosing domestic universities climbed only 3 per cent.
句型三：标准对比 + 补充说明
FT 原文：
The Pfizer results far exceed the US Food and Drug Administration’s criteria for approving a Covid-19 vaccine, which mandates an efficacy of at least 50 per cent in placebo-controlled trials.
句型公式：
[X] far exceed [Y]‘s standards for [Z], which mandates/requires [condition]
为什么好？
当你想说”某个结果远超标准”时，大多数学生会写：
❌ 学生初版
The results are much better than the standard. The standard says you need at least 50 per cent.
✅ 升级版
The test scores far exceed the university’s admission criteria, which requires a minimum of 85 per cent in English proficiency.
💡 效果
far exceed 比 much better than 正式精准；非限制性定语从句 which mandates/requires 优雅地补充标准细节，不用另起一句。
考试替代品：
far exceed可替换为far surpass/significantly outperformmandates可替换为stipulates/sets a threshold of
考场仿写：
The company’s quarterly revenue far exceeded market expectations, which had predicted only modest growth of 5 per cent.
The student’s final project far surpassed the course requirements, which mandated at least 10,000 words of original research.
写作建议
这3个句型有一个共同特点：它们都不是”单词”的胜利，而是结构的胜利。你不必背 jumped 还是 soared——真正拉开分数差距的，是 has been found to be...in a breakthrough that could... 这种复合句结构的能力。
建议：
- 把这三个句型公式抄在笔记本上
- 每个公式自己写2个仿写句（用不同话题）
- 下次写作文时，刻意用至少一个替换掉原来的简单句
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